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The first page of my diary Hello! this is my first page of my diary. My name is Gregorio and i am really glad to be signed here because i like writing, improving my English and of course helping the other people to learn them my language. i am keen of science and ancience literature! bye

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The first page of my diary

Hello!
this This is my first page of my diary. My name is Gregorio and i I am really glad to be signed in here because i I like writing, improving my English and of course helping the other people to learn them my language.
i I am keen of on science and ancience ancient literature!

bye

 

Good job.  I understood everything easily.

 

Here are some suggestions to make it sound more natural

 

'The first page of my diary' ----> 'This is the first entry in my diary'.  'page' is ok to use but 'entry' is clearer about what you mean.

 

'i am really glad to be signed here'  ---->  ''I am really glad to be a member here' OR I am really glad that I joined this site'

 

'I am keen on science and ancient literature!' ----> 'I am interested in science and ancient ancient literature!'  'Keen' is ok to use but I think 'interested' sounds better in this context.

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