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I tried a cable park ! The last Monday I have tried a cable park, for people who don't what is it, it's like wake boarding but without a boat, the ship is replaces by a thing likes... um the same machine we can use to go to the top of the maintain after skiing/snowboarding. Well I wanted to try it since an age, because it's a really a great alternative of kitesurfing is the wind condition is too bad. I really enjoyed it, if you have some basic technical skill in that kind of sport it's not really difficult and you can have fun immediately ! The really big difference the kitesurfing that you don't have to deal with the kite and it's more physical. My arms were painful during the two next day but, I'm still alive and ready for the next session of cable park ! :-)

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I Tried a Cable Park!

The Last Monday, I have tried a cable park. For people who don't what it is, it's like wake boarding, but without a boat. The ship is replaced by a thing likes... Um, the same machines we can use to go to the top of the maintain after skiing/snowboarding.

Well I have wanted to try for a long time it since an age, because it's a really a great alternative to of kitesurfing if the wind conditions is are too bad. I really enjoyed it, if you have some basic technical skills in that kind of sport it's not really difficult and you can have fun immediately! The really big difference is that when you are the kitesurfing, that you don't have to deal with the kite and it's more physical.

My arms were painful during the two next days, but, I'm still alive and ready for the next session of cable park! :-)

 

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