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Ebola virus causes more than nine hundred deaths in africa
the virus has already infected 1711 people, 932 of whom have died, according to the World Health Organization (WHO). Therefore, the WHO has called a meeting of its emergency committee hoping that experts could determine if this current epidemic is a worlwide emergency. Also, they will inform the director general of the institution, who is going to take the decision to say it or not. Moreover, WHO has activated the global alert and response network (GOARN), composed of international agencies, governments, universities and other entities and asked experts in various fields who can traveled to affected countries to try to contain the virus. Finally, the response plan also specifies it's necessary that neighboring countries be ready for a possible contagion.
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Ebola Virus Causes more than Nine Hundred Deaths in Africa
The Ebola virus has already infected 1711 people, 932 of whom have died, according to the World Health Organization (WHO). Therefore, the WHO has called a meeting of its emergency committee hoping that experts could can determine if this current epidemic is a worldwide emergency. Also, they will inform the director general of the institution, who is going to take will make the official decision to say it or not. Moreover, WHO has activated the global alert and response network (GOARN), composed of international agencies, governments, universities and other entities and asked experts in various fields who can traveled travel to affected countries to try assist in the attempt to contain the virus. Finally, the response plan also specifies that it's necessary that for neighboring countries to be ready for a possible contagion.
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