vacations with family
My family and I went to a club to relax for vacations, this club had pools, games for kids, soccer field, tennis, volleyball, etc.. We met another family there just as large as mine, and we began to talk, play and hang out with us, I met Carlos a football player like me so then we became friends and we beat another team that we had wagered. generally all the peole had a good time and enjoyed a cute sun and good food cooked there.
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Vacations with family
My family and I went to a club to relax for vacations. The club had pools, games for kids, soccer field, tennis, volleyball, etc. We met another family there as large as ours and we began to talk, play and hang out together, I met Carlos, a football player like me so then we became friends and we beat another team that we had wagered. Generally all people (we) had a good time and enjoyed a cute sun and good food cooked there.
esto está bien escrito?
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