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Book presentation(recommend a book to junior form students) Hello everybody! I know all of you want to improve English, so I am going to give you an idea to improve your English reading and writing skills. When you read books in English, then you can improve them. Today, I want to recommend a book to you, this book called The Old Man and the Sea. It was written by Hemingway. The story is about an old man called Santiago who was a fisher fought with a big fish and some sharks. The old man had already gone eighty-four days without fish. One day, he went fishing alone. His experience helped him to know where the fish was. Then, a fish took his hook. The fish was bigger than his boat. But he could take the fish and the fish led his boat to inch. When the fish was leading him, he couldn’t sleep, he hurt and his hand had cramped. He felt lonely and tired but he had not given up. Finally he caught the fish. However, disaster was happening. The dead fish attracted sharks. He won a shark but he could not fight with all sharks, so the sharks hit the fish and eat it. He only had the head itself at last. He fought with the big fish 3 days but he got nothing at the end of the story. I admire his confidence and fortitude. He hadn’t gotten a fish many days, but he still believed that he could get one. He was an old man and had not a good body. It is an astounding discovery that he fought with a big fish and never thought about the words give up. It was unbelievable. If I were him, I would give up quickly. I can learn to be a confident and strong girl. Nothing is impossible. But if you let the chance go away, then all the things cannot happen. Try your best and work hard. I hope you and me will be succeed after few years. Let focus this book how to improve your English skills. This book has both Chinese and English words. But please do not just read the Chinese. You should read the English. When you do not understand what the sentence’s talking about, then you can read the Chinese. When you read this book, you can learn more English words. You also can learn about how to write a fiction. This is a good book, let read it.

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Book presentation (to recommend a book to junior form students)

Hello everybody!   I know that all of you want to improve English; so, I am going to give you an idea to improve your English reading and writing skills.  When you read books in English, then you can improve those skills.   Today, I want to recommend you a book to you, this book which is called "The Old Man and the Sea".  It was written by Hemingway.

The story is about an old man called Santiago who was a fisher, who fought (or: ...fisher fighting) with against a big fish and some sharks. The old man has already gone eighty-four days without fish. One day, he went fishing alone. His experience helped him to know where the fish was. Then, a fish took his hook. The fish was bigger than his boat, but he could take the fish and the fish led his boat to inch. When the fish was leading him, he couldn’t sleep, he was hurt and his hand had cramped. He felt lonely and tired but he did not given up. Finally he caught the fish. However, disaster was happened. The dead fish attracted sharks. He won fought off a shark but he could not fight with against all sharks, so the sharks hit bite off the dead fish and ate it. He only had the fish head itself for himself at last. He fought with against the big fish three (3) days, but he got nothing at the end of the story.

I admire his confidence and fortitude. He hasn’t gotten a fish many days, but he still believed that he could get one. He was an old man and did not have a good body. It is an astounding discovery that he fought with against a big fish and never thought about the words of give up. It was unbelievable. If I were him, I would give up quickly. I can learn to be a confident and strong girl. Nothing is impossible. But if you let the chance go away, then all the things cannot (or simply: nothing will) happen. Try your best and work hard. I hope that you and me I will be succeed (or: will be successful) after few years (or: sometime).

Let focus this book on how to improve your English skills. This book has was written / published in both Chinese and English words. But (better with: However,) please do not just read the Chinese. You should read the English first. When you do not understand what the sentence is talking about, then you can read the Chinese. When you read this book, you can (or: will be able to) learn more English words. You also can also learn about how to write a fiction. This is a good book.  So, let us (or: let's) read it.

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Good day.  /  祝  是日安好。

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