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I feel terrible. I fell terrible because, I broke my cell phone and my tablet in only 2 days. Long history. But those are simple things.

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I feel terrible.

I feel terrible because I broke my cell phone and my tablet in only 2 days. Long history. It's a long story.
But those are simple things.

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Original (With edits):

I feel terrible.

I fell feel terrible because, I broke my cell phone and my tablet in only 2 days. Long history story.
But those are simple things.

 

How I would have personally written it:

I feel terrible.

I feel terrible because I broke my cell phone and tablet in only two days. It is a long story, but thankfully those are simple things.

 

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I'm sorry about your phone and tablet!
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Oh my god! That happened to me too! The charging port of my tablet and cell phone broke down and I had to buy a new cell phone.

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