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English it's is great
Hey! I am Jade, and I want learn English because my English is very bad. x) I am always happy because being sad it's is bad. :/ I love to converse say with other people and love to help babies! I work at as a babysitter! I looove children and babies but I don't have my own ... OUF x). I listen music to French music and I'm an outsider! I want travel in the world... But it's just a dream. x) It's end That's all! Goodbye, I love you!
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English is great.
Hey! I am Jade and I want to learn english because my english is very bad x) I am always happy because being sad isn't good :/ I love talking with other people and I love to help babies! I work at babysitting! I love children and babies but I don't have any ... OUF x). I listen to french music and foreigner music! I want to travel around the world but it's just a dream x) It's the end. Goodbye I love you!
I'm not native English speaker but I hope my correction help you.
English it's great
Hey! I'm Jade and I want to improve my English because right now my English is very bad x). I'm always happy because I don't believe in being sad :/. I love to talk with other people and I love babies! I'm a babysitter! I love children and babies but I don't have any yet ... OUF x). I listen to french and foreign music! I want travel around the world.. but that's just a dream x). The end. Good bye. I love you!
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