Hi!!!!!!!! I´M LEARNING

Ok, I think I´ve learned English...maybe perhaps I need to study more, but I´ve passed all my courses., I feel weird because I don´t  can't say many things in English, I´m very shy for when I speak English with other people persons. To be able to speak English one needs to be fluent and I am not! For learn english it´s necesary the fluency and i don´t have it!! :l

Hi!!!!!!!! I´M LEARNING

Ok, I think I´ve learned English...maybe I need to study more, but I´ve passed all courses. I feel weird because I don´t many things [what things? meaning is ambiguous. Do you mean "I can't say many things in English"?] in English. I´m very shy so I don't for speak english with other peoplepersons. For To learn english, it´s necesary to have some the fluency and I don´t have it!! :l

Okay nice job. You need to work on punctuation and clarity. Try to keep sentences short and to the point. Keep working on it. Its okay to be shy but you need to talk with someone to get that fluency.

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