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WILLPOWER Hi i had a long time without watch this space. And today i was thinking in return this as a habit, because i need to practice so much English, i dont want forgetting the learning in my basic english course. There's a big power that the people have, It's when they can promise something and then get it. Not everybody is enough able to say that is one of this kind of people, who has "willpower" I want to talk about it. I'm sure the willpower is one of the better quality someone can have. Because everybody is who their actions say they're, not who they say they're themself. If not everybody were the best. "the best lie" haha. When a person has willpower it means that he/she's a person really reponsible. because, when he/she says something he/she knows to have to execute it, the willpower means you have own domain about by yourself and you can control your mind, your body, your habits etc. and get your goals. It's a challenge for who practice it every day to show who's, and who could come to be in a future with willpower, hey the secret is trust in yourself , the power of your mind is amazing. ¡¡¡TRUST YOU, AND GET YOUR DREAMS!!! Have a good night. Mandy ;)

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WILLPOWER

Hi it has been a long time without watching this space. And today i was thinking to return to this as a habit, because i need to practice lot more English, i dont want forget the basics  of the english course i had learnt.

There's a big power that the people have, It's when they can promise something and then get it. Not everybody o has "willpower". I want to talk about it.

I'm sure the willpower is one of the better quality someone can have. Because everybody is who, their actions say they're, not who they say they're themselves. If not everybody were the best. "the best lie" haha.

When a person has willpower it means that he/she's a  really reponsible person because when he/she says something he/she knows they have to execute it, the willpower means you have own domain
about by yourself and you can control your mind, your body, your habits etc. and achieve your goals.

It's a challenge to those who practice it every day, to show who's  who could come to be in a future with willpower, hey the secret is, to trust in yourself , the power of your mind is amazing. ¡¡¡TRUST YOURSELF AND acheieve YOUR DREAMS!!! Have a good night. Mandy ;)

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Hello Amanda... Very good effort. your'e grammar is good. spellings are fine. Read more of what others are writing and how. The way you express certain thoughts is unique to the english language. The more you read better u will become at it.. Good luck.

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