10 facts about me

• I love to draw and watch movies. I like all genres.
• My favorite place in Indonesia is Bali, have you heard about it? You can find it in google if you’re willing to. (You can say this but I think it would sound better if you said... 'if you want to.'
• I always have breakfast every morning at 5am, too early for breakfast
• I do not have a boyfriend, but I have many friends who love me.
• I really appreciate cultural differences. Such as western culture and eastern cultures because they are different.
• I could use some languages, such as Indonesian, Javanese, Japanese language and a little English.
• I love to make people laugh
• I love to tell funny stories and make silly faces
• I’m a bathroom singer
• I really want to see your face, if you look like robert pattinson? Aston Kutcher? Calvin Harris, or someone else?

Apart from the corrections, that was really good! Well done!