Article: a escrption of my narrow and wished bedroom.A Description of My Narrow Bedroom

Who haven’t hasn't imagined how you could improve your bedroom to make it perfect? Obviously, I’ve imagine how I could improve my bedroom in many times. Changing the colour of the wall’s colour, the bed’s position, the  collocation, furniture and so on, etc. could be a good way to start. by I can begin.

In the first place, I would begin describing my room. At first sight, I have my bed under the window. Near this, you can find my computer where I play with my computer games and do my homework. In one corner is a, it stays a bookcase, but I’ve only occupied one shelf ve to save for my books. The other shelves are occupied filled with useless stuff. Lastly, there is my closet, it’s small, but I don’t have many clothes.

Secondly, Now I’m going to say mention the changes and the things I won't change. that I would do or not to my bedroom. The best improvement would be to change the colour of the wallsthe wall’s colour; because I don’t like the blue colour that I have., blue, so I would change it to by light blue or light green. But what I’d really like to improve is my computer, it’s old and obsolete. On the other hand, what I like best is my bed because it’s under the window and I sleep very well in summer. It’s so refreshing.

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Article: a A descrption of my narrow current bedroom and the bedroom that I wished I had bedroom.

Who hasn't haven’t imagined how you could improve your bedroom to make it perfect? Obviously, I’ve imagined how I could improve my bedroom in many times. Changing the colour of the wall’s colour, the bed’s location collocation and that of the furniture etc. could be a good way of beginning by I can begin.

In the first place To start with, I will would begin by describing my room. At first sight, you can see that I have my bed under the window. Near this, you can find my computer where I play with my computer games and do my homework. In one corner it stays there is a bookcase, but I’ve only occupied one shelve of it with to save my books. The other shelves are occupied with useless stuff. Lastly, there is my closet, it’s small, but I don’t have many clothes.

Secondly, I’m going to say explain the changes that I would like to carry out and those that I wouldn't do or not to my bedroom. The best improvement would be the chaning the colour of the walls colour; because I don’t like the colour that I have - blue. so I would change by it to light blue or light green. But what I’d really like to improve is my mi computer because it’s old and obsolete. On the other hand, what I like best is my bed because it’s under the window and I sleep very well in summer. It’s so refreshing.

202 Words.

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