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This is first time i write something not special but i hope i can make friends with many you guys out there through this.
Today as usual days of summer, I wake up at around between 6 and 7 am that is a little early but I can’t change or sleep a little more , even though I have nothing to do in the morning. I think this is the resulf of pushing myself always wake up at those time to study for almost a year , then became my biogical clock.Anyway, that is not my main subject I want to tell you but the interesting thing that made my boring life a little colour , I found on web was about the interview of vice with Issei sagaw was born in 1949, in Japan, was arrested for canibalistic crime in 1981 (32 years olds) but didn’t be put on trial or sentenced because the psychologist said he was insane. what made him interesting me of many those cannibals in the whole world. Before I tell you, I am going to give short information of about interview and Issei cannibal story.
My english writting is bad, i hope you can correct my writting. Wishing you have good interesting day =))
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Correct my writting
This is first time THAT i write something. THIS WRITNG IS not special but i hope i can make friends with many OF you guys out there WITH IT.
Today, AS USUAL, I wake up at around 6 and 7 am. That was a little early but I COULDN'T MAKE MYSELF SLEEP anymore, athough I have nothing to do in the morning. I think this is the result of me pushing myself WAKING UP EARLY to study for almost a year AND MY BIOLOGICAL CLOCK GOT USED TO IT. Anyway, that is not my main subject. TODAY, I want to tell you SOMETHING interesting thing that brought into my boring life a little colour.
On the internet, I watched an interview of vice with (mình không biet sửa chỗ of vice như thế nào) Issei Sagaw, who was born in Japan in 1949. He was arrested for canibalistic crime in 1981 (HE WAS 32 years olds THEN) HOWEVER, HE WASN'T put on trial or BEING sentenced because the he was DIAGNOSED WITH SOME PSYCHOLOGICAL PROBLEMS. THAT WAS what made him interesting to me of many OF those cannibals in the world.
Before I tell you, I am going to give short information of about interview and Issei cannibal story. ( Không hiểu đoạn này lắm. Before I tell you cai gi? Bạn muốn kể chuyện gì? )
I DON'T WRITE WELL IN ENGLISH AND i hope you can correct my THIS writing for me. Wishing you A good AND interesting day =))
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