Correct me please!

Correct Me Please! (Note: In English titles, all words are capitalized, except words such as "the" or "a".)

I think it's very important leading a healthy life style,

I think it's very important to lead a healthy lifestyle. (Note: This is a complete sentence, therefore it should be followed with a period, not a comma.)

people all should worry of their health and adopt advices like: eat healthy, do any sport or something.

People should all worry about their health and adopt advice, such as: eating healthily, doing a sport, or something.

Even it is important because you can get good feeling all the day in your work or family activities.

It is important because the good feeling that you get will continue throughout the day, during your work and family activities. (Note: I do not understand your use of the word "Even" in this sentence.)

I usually go to run twice a week, once on Tuesday and once on Thursday, for thirty minutes each time.

I usually run twice a week, once on Tuesday and once on Thursday, for thirty minutes each time.

Very good!  By the way, I am a runner too!