Dream home

I have my dream home. It is near the beach and the sea. There are 3 floors in it at least. I have my own bedroomon on the second floor. In my bedroom, there is a desk and with a computer is on it. I can get information from the Internet. My favounrite favourite place is the balcony. My family and I can chat there and look out at the beach. I also have a garden and I can grow flowers or vegetables there.

Good!

-Be careful when you use the punctuation marks "." and ",". You need to put a space after them and not before them. 

-When you write two pieces of information in a sentence, it is good to join them together with the word and. When you do this you do not use a comma

I hope this helps! :)