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My life
Hello, I'm Lorenzo from Italy and I'm 25 years old and I'm an assembler of electronic equipment for HIFI systems (OR for a HIFI company). I work every days with electronics boards and tools and I handle the of quality control too. Now I live in Pontedera, a small town in the middle (in the middle isn't necessary unless you want to be specific that is exactly in the middle, if so halfway between Florence and Pisa sounds more natural) between Florence and Pisa . I'm here to improve my English for my job and for travelling. I like travelling around the world (around the world doesn't sound right, i'd say simply traveling the world) very much around the world but so far now I have only travelled around the Europe only. Last year I went to Ireland, Scotland and England and I think Edinbrough is the most beautiful city I have ever seen. Next year I'd like to go to the USA, to in the west coast moving (travelling would sound better) from Colorado to California. I'd like to see the Monument Valley, Grand Canyon, Las Vegas and S. Francisco.
This afernoon I' m taking an English course at the British Insitute of Pisa.
Very easy to read and understand...hope the corrections are uselful
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