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Plz correct my wrong parts. ^^ This morning, I heard My older sister's baby is a man. She has had a baby for about 4 months, now the sex is distinguished. Nowadays, My sister has made many stuff for baby. Sometimes she sends pictures kind of she made things. I think That is really big change from woman to mom. Also That must be big challenge. Anyway, I will buy balls for my cousin as a uncle. I want he will be a man who likes sports like me. I hope she is going to give a birth well on December and the baby will be raised healthily. It has already been about 4 months since i left Korea. Time flies so fast. I have traveled 4 countries for a while and now I have stayed in Australia about 1 month. It is winter in Australia. The temperature is more warmer than Korea's, but Sometimes I felt really cold. I think Korea's home have an ondol but Australia's home don't have anything kind of heater. However, I have to get used to this culture. I hope Spring will come early. Plz correct my wrong parts. ^^ Thank you in advance!!

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Please correct any wrong parts. ^^

 

To be honest, I had to read it a couple of times to understand what you meant. My first thought was that she had already given birth.

This morning, I found out that my older sister's baby will be a boy. She has been pregnant for about four months now, and finally the baby's sex is known. Nowadays, My sister has made (created?) many things for the baby. Sometimes she sends me pictures of the things she has made. I think that it is a really big change from woman to mother. Also, that must be a big challenge.

Anyway, I will buy some balls for my nephew, as an uncle would. I want him to be a man who likes sports, like me. I hope she will give a birth around mid-December and the baby will be raised healthily.

It has already been about four months since I left Korea. Time flies so fast. I have travelled through four countries for a while and now I have been in Australia for about one month. It is now winter in Australia. The weather is more warmer than Korea's, but sometimes I've felt really cold. I think it's because Korean homes have an ondol (a heated floor) but Australian homes don't have anything kind of heater like that. However, I have to get used to this way of living. I hope spring will come early.


Please correct any parts which are wrong. ^^ Thank you in advance!!

 

Not bad... I miss ondol as well.

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Plz correct my wrong parts. ^^

This morning, I heard My older sister's baby is a man. She has had a baby for about 4 months, now the sex is distinguished. Nowadays, My sister has made many stuff for baby. Sometimes she sends pictures kind of she made things. I think That is really big change from woman to mom. Also That must be big challenge.

Anyway, I will buy balls for my cousin as a uncle. I want he will be a man who likes sports like me. I hope she is going to give a birth well on December and the baby will be raised healthily.

It has already been about four months since I left Korea. Time flies so fast. I have traveled four countries for a while and now I have stayed in Australia about one month. It is winter in Australia. The temperature is more warmer than Korea's, but Sometimes I felt really cold. I think Korea's home have an ondol but Australia's home don't have anything kind of heater. However, I have to get used to this culture. I hope Spring will come early.


Plz correct my wrong parts. ^^ Thank you in advance!!

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