My first sleep over screwed;;

There is a plan that some of my high school friends gather and have a sleep over at one of friends' friend's apartment. But I just can't do that!!!!! Why?? It's because of my baby sister and my parents!! They're going to visit an island for hiking for one night and one day and I have to take care of my sister;;; I can't leave my baby sister and grandmother at home alone. Ah......What can I do?? So, I decided to hang out with friends untill(one l) my mom and dad's departure and then come back home to take care of her! them since you mentioned your sister and your grandmother Wow What a wonderful plan!

Good.  I would not use the termed "screwed" for any writing . My plans were screwed up or my plans got screwed, but this word comes from a sexual term and it is ok to use in casual speaking but not in writing, especially for something like this.

My first sleep over screwed (My First Sleepover Was Messed Up!)

There is a plan that Some of my high school friends plan to gather (get together) and have a sleep over at one of friends' friend's apartment. But I just can't do that!!!!! Why?? It's because of my baby sister and my parents!! They're going to visit an island for hiking for one night and one day and I have to take care of my sister. I can't leave my baby sister and grandmother at home alone. Ah......What can I do?? So, I decided to hang out with my friends untill my mom and dad's departure and then have to come back home to take care of her! Wow, what a wonderful plan!

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Speaking Matters!

In Korea, it's hard to improve my English speaking ability because there's there are few chances to speak English! Until I graduate high school, I have been studying studied 'Reading English', ' English Grammar' and ' Listening' but have barely studied about speaking English. So Therefore, I can read and understand what other people say, but what I have to say when I have something to say, it just lingers in my head and don't doesn't come out from my mouth. So, basically, I just tend to murmur.
However, considering my dream to be a nurse who can work abroad, it's important to upgrade my speaking ability as soon as possible in order to achieve my dream more quickly. I know speaking a lot is a good way to improve my speaking level, but I just can't seem to do that! Every word I know fades away when I try to speak. Wonderful, isn't it? 후................. What can I do try for to improve my speaking capacity?

I think maybe finding someone foreigners in Korea to practice speaking English with or maybe even finding an English tutor could help. Basically, someone who you will force yourself to speak only in English. Another thing you could do is when you write notes on iTalki, such as this one, you could record yourself reading it and post it along with the writing. That way native speakers can help you out if there is something that you need help with. 

Speaking matters!

In Korea, it's hard to improve my English speaking ability because there's few chances to speak English! Until graduate high school, I studied 'reading English', ' English grammar' and ' Listening' but barely studied about speaking English. So, I can read, understand what other people say but what I have to say just lingers in my head and don't come out from my mouth. So, basically, I just murmur.

 However, considering my dream to be a nurse who work abroad, it's important to upgrade my speaking ability as soon as possible to achieve my dream more quickly. I know speaking a lot is good way to improve my speaking level. But!!! I just can't do that! Every word I know fades away when I try to speak. Wonderful, isn't it? 후................. What can I try for my speaking capacity?