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Hiking. At least once a month a group of friends go hiking. That day, very early in the morning, we get together, take the car and drive until the target. Usually we select mountains that are less than two hours distance by car. When we arrive and take all the things that we need, the backpack, the trekking poles, a GPS navigation device, water, food, sunscreen, etc. and of course, a camera! We begin our trip and from time to time we drink water and take photos, lots of photos! Each two hours or similar we take a break and eat someting. When we arrive at the top of the mountain we enjoy the sigh, rest a while and return to the original point. During the return journey in the car, we decide what will be our next aim. And you? Come on! See you on the next mountain!

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Hiking.

At least once a month a group of friends go hiking. That On the day, very early in the morning, we get together, take the car and drive to our destination until the target. Usually we select mountains that are less than two hours distance by car.
When we arrive and We take all the things that we need, the backpacks, the trekking poles, a GPS navigation device, water, food, sunscreen, etc. and of course, a camera!
We begin our trip and from time to time we drink water and take photos, lots of photos! Each Every two hours or so similar we take a break and eat someting. When we arrive at reach the top of the mountain we enjoy the view sigh, rest a while and then we descend. return to the original point.
During the return journey in the car, we decide what our next venture will be our next aim.
And you?
Come on!
See you on the next mountain!

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Hiking.

At least once a month a group of friends go hiking. That day, very early in the morning, we get  ( got )together, take( took )the car and drive ( drove ) until ( we reached our dectination ) the target . Usually we select mountains that are less than two hours distance by car.
When we arrive ( we leave ) and  ( we )take all the things that we need, the backpack, the trekking poles, a GPS navigation device, water, food, sunscreen, etc. and of course, a camera!
We begin our trip and from time to time we drink water and take photos, lots of photos! Each two hours or similar  ( so )we take a break and eat something. When we arrive at the top of the mountain we enjoy the sigh ( scene  or site ), rest a while and return to the original point.
During the return journey in the car, we decide what will be our next aim.
And you?
Come on!
See you on the next mountain! Super , you write English very well. What I added just made it somewhat more natural

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Thanks Leigh! That picture is from a wallpaper and I do not know where exactly it is but in Spain you can find this kind of view in the north, Asturias, Galicia, Pais Vasco...
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?What a great view. Where in Spain in this?

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