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Swimming in the morning I've been taking a lesson for swimming since last February. The purpose I decided to start was for diet. I got weight more than 5 kg after pregnant, so I needed to loose weight. For diet, swimming was not that good, because I couldn't swim enough. Actually, it was almost my first time to learn swim. (When I was young, I took a lesson for it, but it was quite short time.) Nowadays, my purpose is changed because I realized eating habit is the most important for diet. I'm trying to swim the butterfly. It's really difficult, but I feel I'm getting better. I hope that my swimming skill is perfect as soon as possible.

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Swimming in the morning

I've been taking a lesson for swimming lessons since last February.

The purpose I decided to start lessons for was for a diet.
I got weight more than 5 kg after pregnant, so I needed to loose weight.

For my diet, swimming was not that good, because I couldn't swim well enough.
Actually, it was almost my first time to learn to swim.
(When I was young, I took a swimming lesson for it, but it was for quite a short time.)

Nowadays, my purpose is has changed because I realized my eating habits are the most important for my diet.
I'm trying to swim the butterfly stroke. It's really difficult, but I feel I'm getting better.

I hope that my swimming skills is perfect improve as soon as possible.

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Swimming in the morning

I've been taking a lessons (because you took more than one) for swimming since last February.

The purpose I decided to start was for diet my fitness. 
I got gained weight, more than 5 kg after being pregnant, so I needed to loose lose weight.

For diet, swimming was not that good, because I couldn't swim frequently enough.
Actually, it was almost my first time to learning swimming.
(When I was young, I took a lessons for it, but it was only for a quite short time.)

Nowadays, my purpose is changed because I realized eating habit what I eat is the most important for my diet.
I'm trying to swim the butterfly. It's really difficult, but I feel like I'm getting better.

I hope that my swimming skills is perfect will improve as soon as possible.

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I think that you don't need to loose weight . Because you looks good now. I hope that I can see the photo of swimming at tomorrow note. :)

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