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Long time no see!My friends(^_^)~
Hi,all my guys.How is everything going with you?:-D I haven't been online on italki for a long time,longer than one month,I think.
The last month was quite a hard one.In the June,I was busy with my final exams.We had 8 final exams in total o(╯□╰)o…… and the intervals between them were very short in the exam weeks.So I had little time to review ( revise).I woke up early every day and then went to library and reviewed my study (revised) regularly.Thanks to God.I got nice scores in the subjects that were already shown on the school website.(^_^)
Now I am in (on) my summer holiday.But I still have to study with my hydromechanics teacher because he want me to be more prepared for the next stage of study.And at the same time,there is a lot of affairs that need me to do (things that i need to do) for my futher study.I didn't go home till now.But I want(ed) to.Because I just had a younger brother a few days before i found out i have a new baby brother. He was is my aunt's son and only 40 days old.I saw his pictures.He is very lovely!!!O(∩_∩)O
How about you,my friends?~
Hi Guodong
Congratulations on your finals results. I have corrected your text by crossing out words that you don't need and highlighting any added words in yellow. I wasn't completely sure what you were trying to say in the last section so hope i have interpreted it correctly :)
Well done on your achievments
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