Please help me to correction the introduction of an online shop

* Please help me and correct for me, thank you :)
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Sally Dream is was owned by a day dreamer girl called Sally.
Previously, she was just like an average usually online shopper buyer, same as you and me.
She's the girl who loves uniquely designed clothing, but the local shops never seemed meet her needs. market is not satisfy her desire.

So in January 2012, she decided to create an online concept store to fuel fight with her passion for fashion. Every time Sally discovers a the fashion gem treasure [gem is used more commonly in English], she's so excited to share her findingsfashion lover, that's the reason she wants to create an online store. to share everything that she found.

But I would use something more like this, and replace the entire last sentence:
"It is Sally's true love for fashion that drives her to share these discoveries through her online shop." 

Please help me to correction the introduction of an online shop

* Please help me and correct for me, thank you :)
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Sally Dream was?? owned by a day dreamer girl called Sally.  (Do you mean is owned, 'was' is in the past?
Previously she was just like an a usually online buyer, same as you and me.
She's the girl who loves unique design clothing, but the market is does not satisfy her desires. 

So, in January 2012, she decided to create an online concept store to fight with for her passion of fashion.
Every time Sally discovers a the fashion treasure, she's so exciting excited to share it with her fashion lover loving friends. That's the reason she wanna wants to create an online concept store to share everything that she found finds.