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Song: Some Heat it´s a Song for my rock band. ;) Chorus Love me tonight Cause i have glaciers On my body Love me tonight This is one reason It makes me feel alive Verse I Have you ever Felt like a zombie? I believe it is Have you ever Wanted to share Your emptiness ? I believe it is Have you ever Wanted to be With a stranger? I believe it is Verse II Ours cat´s eyes met us Then I wrapped in yours game Which I blindly believed Each of your lies This makes me feel So so special God & goddess Of ours pantheon In each kiss we drank The loneliness of ourselves We are only dead Looking for some heat Maybe it was the most similarTo love x2 Thanks for correction

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Song: Some Heat

it´s a Song for my rock band. ;)

Chorus
Love me tonight
Cause i have glaciers
On my body
Love me tonight
This is one reason (for the reason that)
It makes me feel alive


Verse I
Have you ever
Felt like
a zombie?
I believe it is

Have you ever
Wanted to share
Your emptiness ?
I believe it is

Have you ever
Wanted to be
With a stranger?
I believe it is

Verse II
Ours cat´s eyes met us
Then I was wrapped in yours game
Which in which (or) where I blindly believed
Each of your lies

This makes me feel
So so special
God & goddess
Of ours pantheon

In each kiss we drank
The loneliness of ourselves
We are only dead
Looking for some heat


Maybe it was the most
similarTo love x2

Thanks for correction

 

Really great! Me gusta mucho! With lyrics grammar is not so important, but there are just a couple confusing lines. I'd love to hear the song when you finish.

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