The weather is so bad!
Our farm in a valley in Hoabinh province. Today it rain very very had. Our field,road were flooded. Streams are full water, so we can't go out to buy food. We can plant vegetable, but we only have a little rice, pig meat. If it still rain, we 'll been to hungry. Hope the weather would better on tomorrow. We can go out for food and go back to work!
Correct help me, please. Thanks you!
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The weather is so bad!
Our farm is in a valley in Hoabinh province. Today it rained very, very, hard. Our field and the roads were flooded. The streams are full of water, so we can't go out to buy food. We can plant vegetables, but we only have a little rice and pig meat pork. If it stillcontinues to rain, we'll been to hungry. I hope the weather would will be better on tomorrow. We can go out for food and go back to work!
Correct help me, please. Thanks you!
Good job. You need to use a few more connecting words, and pay attention to the tense of your verbs.
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