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An Holiday in on Rhodos
I'm just back from an holiday in Greece, I have been spent a week on Rhodos.
The island is wonderful, with a clear sea clear and enchanting beaches enchanting.
In the middle of the island there are hills and streams full of water and vegetation, we saw many rivulets bordered surrounded to by strange flowers and wild oleanders.
I visited the butterfly valley, it was stunning., The butterflies were orange dots spots in the wood!
I was surrounded by thousands of them while we were walking in this valley., We walked along in a path with small wooden bridges to crossing the small river along which/where they live.
I have seen saw many villages/hamlets and isolated typical churches and the wild goats crossing the road regardless of the traffic. cars on it.
Rodi city is truly interesting with the old walls, the street of the templar and old palaces., It's harbour where there are has 3 old windmills, ... then there are the acropolises ... captivating, but a bit too touristy!
It was a 'dive' into history
A holiday in Rhodos*
I have just come back from a holiday in Greece,where I have spent a week in Rhodos.
The island is wonderful, with a clear sea and enchanting beaches .
Inland there are hills full of water and vegetation, where we saw many rivulets* surrounded by strange flowers and wild oleanders.
I visited the butterfly valley, it was stunning: the woods were spotted with orange butterflies!
I was surrounded by thousands of them while we were walking in this valley, on a path with small wooden bridges to cross the small rivers, along which/where they live.
I have seen many isolated picturesque churches and villages where the wild goats cross the road regardless of the cars on it.
Rodi city is truly interesting with the old walls, the street of the templar and old palaces, its harbour where there are 3 old windmills ... then there are the acropolises ... captivating, but a bit too touristy!
it was a 'dive' into history
Great job
* AN is used only before vowel sounds. Since the H is voiced in "holiday", you would say "a holiday". In a word like "hour", however, the H isn't pronounced, and you would say "an hour".
* I have never heard "rivulets" used conversationally. Streams might be a better word here, but I suppose if the stream is small enough it could be considered a rivulet.
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