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How do you like it? Once upon a time, during the tide many starfishes were out of the sea on the bank. Then the low tide had came and a huge amount of them started to dry up on the hot sun. A boy, which was walking along the bank, began to throw the starfishes into the water, that would have helped them to continue their life way. A man approached him: - But that`s just silly! - the man shouted. - Look around! There are billions of starfishes, the beach is littered with them. Your attempts won`t change nothing. The boy picked up the next starfish, thought for a moment, threw it into the sea and said: - No, I think my attempts will change many things... for this starfish. I `ve read this short story in Russian and I want to share it with all my friends and with those who just read my profile. I will be thankful as well if you correct my mistakes.

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Once upon a time, during the low tide many starfishes were out of the sea on the bank. Then When the low tide had came come, and a huge amount of them started to dry up on in the hot sun.

A boy, which who was walking along the bank, began to throw the starfishes into the water. That would have helped them to continue their life way stay alive. A man approached him:

- But that's just silly! - the man shouted. - Look around! There are billions of starfishes, the beach is littered with them. Your attempts won't change nothing anything.

The boy picked up the next starfish, thought for a moment, threw it into the sea and said:

- No, I think my attempts it will change many things... for this starfish.

 

I've read this short story in Russian and I want to share it with all my friends and with those who just read my profile. I will be thankful as well if you correct my mistakes.

 

(It's a nice story. Thanks for sharing!)

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