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My Best Friend
My best friend's name is Ekram. W have been friends for the last 15 years. We met for the first time in our school when we were in standard six. I knew his younger brother, Imran, who was also a friend of mine before I met Ekram. However, with passage of over time, I lost contact with Imran and my friendship with Ekram got stronger and stronger. We used to share all our secrets and most importantly food during lunch break, as his mom is a great cook and I used to be the one who ate his lunch most days.We completed our schooling and after that he opted to study engineering and I pursued law. I went to Dehradun to do my colleging, far away from my native place Calcutta, and my contact with him were was minimal as both of us had new sets of friends in college. But, whenever I used to come came (or would come) back to Calcutta and got in touch with Ekram things used to would be just like before. only.
In 2011 both of us completed our college and started our professional career. We hardly get time to talk on daily basis but we make sure that we catch-up at least once on weekends and we have been doing this for the last three years. I don't know how life would have been if I had not met Ekram. 1. as Whenever I am in trouble he is the one who helps me out. I wish hope our friendship continues through out our life.
(1. above: sounded like a "run on" sentence to me. In spoken language it would probably be fine)
Could any one please correct my entry and point out the errors and how my sentences could have been crisp or better structured.
Thanks.
Very well written! Just a few very minor errors. I hope my corrections are clear!
Best of luck!
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