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IELTS preparation. An unformal letter of apology. ~20min Dear Jack, I'm writing to you to apologize for the inconvenience that I shall not be able to meet you at the airport. I remember that your flight is landing on Friday at 6PM. I have a serious reason to be in the other part of the city. If your flight is delayed and land after 7PM I will return and take you to the hotel. Anyway, to be sure you will get to the right place and not to be lost in unknown city let me explain the fastest way to find your hotel. As far as I remember you booked Novotel in the center of the city. When you arrive to the airport find taxi office located to the right at the first floor. There are 2 Novotel hotels in Moscow. One is situated at the center (it is yours), second one - outside of the city close to Moscow Ring Road. Your hotel is easy recognizable building with white columns and 2 big eagle sculptures to the both sides. That is why this building is often called 'Eagles Nest'. It takes no more than 20 minutes to get there by taxi despite all the traffic lights, one way roads and pedestrian streets in the center. It will cost you no more than 20$. May I apologize again and ask you to call me when you reach your room. I reserved a table for the diner in one very famous by its Russian cuisine restaurant. See you at the evening. Olga ------------------------------------- TASK IS: You have invited you friend from overseas for a family wedding. You will not be able to pick him up at the airport. Write a letter: (i) why you cannot pick him at the airport. (ii) how to get to his hotel (iii) describe the hotel.

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IELTS preparation. An unformal letter of apology. ~20min

 

 

Dear Jack,

I'm writing to you to apologize for the inconvenience that I shall not be able to meet you at the airport. I remember that your flight is landing on Friday at 6PM. I have a serious an important reason to be in on the other part side of the city. If your flight is delayed and lands after 7PM I will return and take you to the hotel.

Anyway, to be sure you will get to the right place and not to be won't get lost in an unknown city let me explain the fastest way to find your hotel. As far as I remember you booked Novotel in the center of the city.

When you arrive at the airport, find the taxi office located to on the right at on the first floor. There are 2 Novotel hotels in Moscow. One is situated at in the center (it is yours), the second one is outside of the city, close to Moscow Ring Road. Your hotel is an easily recognizable building with white columns and 2 big eagle sculptures to the on both sides. That is why this building is often called "Eagles Nest". It takes no more than 20 minutes to get there by taxi despite all the traffic lights, one way roads and pedestrian streets in the center. It will cost you no more than $20.

May I apologize again and ask you to call me when you reach your room. I reserved a table for the diner in one very famous by its Russian cuisine restaurant. I reserved you a table for dinner at a restaurant very famous for its Russian cuisine. 

See you at the this evening.


Olga
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TASK IS:
You have invited you friend from overseas for a family wedding.
You will not be able to pick him up at the airport.
Write a letter:
(i) why you cannot pick him at the airport.
(ii) how to get to his hotel
(iii) describe the hotel.

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Hi Bronson, thank you very much for your correction. Actually Novotel has similar buildings to other countries, they are not unique and not memorable at all, just modern building from concrete and glass. We have many restaurants in Moscow, most of them have Italian quisine (I hate it) but you can find Russian quisine here very easly. Text for IELTS shouldn't be truthful, therefore I wrote using my fantazy and grammar.
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Very good Olya. Not many mistakes at all. I am curious, what is the name of the famous Russian restaurant you referred to?

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