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hello~I`m Mary! hello everybody,I`m new here in italki! I found it is a fantastic place~I love to make friends all over the world!!! This summer, I`m going to take IELTS exam,so,I`ll appreciate if you guys can help me with my English. And,if you have any question about Chinese, China or ME,please just feel free to ask me!

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hello~I`m Mary!

 

Hello everybody, I'm new here on italki! I think this found it is a fantastic place. ~I love to make friends all over the world!!!


This summer, I'm going to take the IELTS exam, so I`dll (or you could say I would) appreciate if you guys can help me with my English. And,i If you have any questions about Chinese, China or me ME, please just feel free to ask me!

 

You do not normally start a sentence with the word "And", and is a connecting word that will join two sentences together into a longer sentence.  Overall, you did very well, keep up the good work! :)

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