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A little about my life I arrived in my flat today after school and than I decided to do something that I hate to do, what do you think this thing is? the answer is to write!. Yes that's it, to write it isn't my favorite form to hanging time. So, why I am writing? I am writing because I am learning English and I know that it is a great way to learn faster, isn't it? And better than that is which here on internet I can to find place where people with English knowledge can help me telling me what I have to change in my text to make it understandable and grammatically correctly. After that I´ll check my wrongs and search for the rules to study it! In the other hands, in the time which I start write what I am thinking it to seem like easy. Am I confusing myself? Doesn't it matter, I´ll write more something to get more answer in this text. Yesterday I was writing my resume and I found something very difficult, because like you can to see I am writing very very basic words, and in CV I need use word with very impact, so I start looking on internet for examples and after join the words and the idea this was my result: "A highly motivated professional with 8 years of experience in IT, ability to work in a collaborative environment, strong business and technical analysis, full life cycle including analysis, requirement specification, use case and data modeling, development, testing and implementation. Possessing excellent analytical and problem solving skills". Is that make sense? Another akward thing that I found was about my degree that I´ll explain below. I am brazilian and I am living in Dublin, Ireland now. In Brazil after I to do my degree I did specialization. In Brazil specialization it is a degree between degree and master degree. So my question is if exist in English one name for this graduation? In Brazil we used to use like that: "Specialization in Java Technology at Federal Technological University of Parana - Brazil"!. I don't know how this text is called, like a conversation, but you don't needs answer my questions! My main intention with this text is the correct grammatically form! Thank's a lot!

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A little about my life

I arrived in my flat today after school and than I decided to do something that I hate to do, what do you think this thing is? the answer is to write!.
Yes that's it, to write it isn't my favorite form to hanging way to pass time.
So, why I am am I writing? I am writing because I am learning English and I know that it is a great way to learn faster, isn't it?
And better than that is which that here on the internet I can to find a place where people with English knowledge knowledge of English can help me by telling me what I have to change in my text to make it understandable and grammatically correctly.
After that I´ll check my wrongs errors and search for the rules to study it!
In the other hands, On the other hand, in the time which since I started to write what I am thinking it to seems like easy. Am I confusing myself?
Doesn't it It doesn't matter, I´ll write more something to get more answers in this text.
Yesterday I was writing my resume and I found something very difficult, because like you can to see I am writing very very basic words, and in CV I need use words with very impact, so I start looking on the internet for examples and after join the words and the idea this was my result:
"A highly motivated professional with 8 years of experience in IT, ability to work in a collaborative environment, strong business and technical analysis, full life cycle including analysis, requirement specification, use case and data modeling, development, testing and implementation. Possessing excellent analytical and problem solving skills". Is Does that make sense? (Sounded good)
Another akward  awkward thing that I found was about my degree that I´ll explain below.
I am brazilian and I am living in Dublin, Ireland now. In Brazil after I to do finished (or completed) my degree I did specialization.
In Brazil specialization it is a degree between a bachelor's degree and master's degree. So my question is if exists in English one name for this graduation? (No there is no degree between them in the USA)

In Brazil we used to use like that: "Specialization in Java Technology at Federal Technological University of Parana - Brazil"!.
I don't know how what this text is called, like a conversation, but you don't needs to answer my questions!
My main intention with this text is the correct grammatically form!
Thank's Thanks a lot!

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