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Last week i went to ShangHai.i don't know ShangHai very well and i lost my way.
suddenly i saw a girl in front of the duilding.i can ask her the way,i said to myself.
excuse me!i said. can you tell me the way to the bus stop .the girl give a smile to me.
she was not living ShangHai.she was a tourist as me.
then she put her hand into her bag and took a map. she open the map and looked at it very careful.
suddenly. i finally found it.she said.
i can take you to there.
let's go.
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last week
Last week, I went to ShangHai. I don't know ShangHai very well and I lost my way (or: I got lost).Suddenly, I saw a girl in front of a building. I can ask her the way, I said to myself.
"Excuse me!", I said, "can you tell me the way to the bus stop station?" The girl gave me a smile;
she did not live in ShangHai, she was a tourist, just like me.
Then she put her hand into her bag and took out a map. She opened the map and looked at it very carefully.
Suddenly, she said. "I finally found it. I can take you
A nice story, Snail, but there are a too many careless capitalisation errors and you need to concentrate more on verb tenses too.
In British English, there are thousands of 'bus stops' in a city, along the routes which the buses follow. The place where all the buses start or terminate, especially for longer journeys, is the 'bus station', or the 'coach station'. (Less frequently, 'bus terminus', or 'bus garage'.)
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last week
Last week i went to ShangHai.i don't know ShangHai very well and i lost my way.
suddenly i saw a girl in front of the duilding.i can ask her the way,i said to myself.
excuse me!i said. can you tell me the way to the bus stop .the girl give a smile to me.
she was not living ShangHai.she was a tourist as me.
then she put her hand into her bag and took a map. she open the map and looked at it very careful.
suddenly. i finally found it.she said.
i can take you to there.
let's go.
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