The problem of mine
recently,i got into a fight with my mother.
i just asked her for something and she felt a little uncomfortable.
then,i asked her for other things with soft voice,
i guessed she was mad at me at that time.
she started to scold me
i couldn't bear her and i shouted to her loudly.
i was very angry with her! she was so easy to angry that she always argues with me.
i have to admit i had a little bit crazy when i shouted to my mother.
why don't i clam down first?why not find the best way to solve this problem?
So i am really penitential.......
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A problem of mine,
Recently, I was in a fight with my mother.
I just asked her for something, and she felt uncomfortable.
Then I asked her again with soft voice, I guess she was angry at me by then.
She started to scold me but I couldn't bear it and I shouted loudly.
I was very angry with her! She was so easy to anger and she always argues with me.
I have to admit I felt a little bit crazy when I shouted at my mother.
Why can't I calm down first? Why not find the best way to solve this problem?
This makes me extremely sorrowful.......
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