William Kamkeamba/ watch / listen / writer
Use the works ( would, windmill, tried, test, bulbs, still).
William Kamkeamba, is person from Kasungo, malawi. He is a good boy and he is good student. Four years ago when he had 14 years old, he read a book in your school. He had read of windmill able to produce energy, he tried made the windmill for your home, for made the windmill he need materials.
He test they made this project, the skill are was very good, able produce energy for 12 watts, when the win blows, it rotates and generates electricity for four bulbs and two radios, after five years still your parents use this project.
He would help your family. Now he studding in the university a continue the project for get better the energy's not only in your country, if no also in the world.
I watched this video in TED.com for more information watch on in website:
http://on.ted.com/tvL4
Thank very much for read my commentaries and thank a lot for correct my text.
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William Kamkeamba/ watch / listen / writer
Use the works (words?) [would (wood?), windmill, tried, test, bulbs, still).
William Kamkeamba, is person from Kasungo, Malawi. He is a good boy and he is good student. Four years ago when he had was 14 years old, he read a book in your (his) school. He had read of windmills able to produce energy. He tried to make (wanted to make) the a windmill for your home his house, for made the but to make a windmill he needed materials.
He made a test they made this project model. The skill are quality was very good and the windmill was able to produce energy for 12 watts of energy. When the wind blows, it rotates and generates electricity for four bulbs and two radios. After five years, still your his parents still use this project it.
He would wants to help your family too. Now he studying in the a university to continue the project. for get He hopes to create better the energy sources, not only in your his country, if no but also in for whole the world.
I watched this video in TED.com for more information watch on in website:
http://on.ted.com/tvL4
Thank very much for reading my commentaries and thanks a lot for correcting my text.
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