Rich and famous

Some people discuss about of being rich and also it is said that everybody would like to be rich and famous.  ((1) "Discuss" doesn't take a preposition.)

In my opinion, TV make has a lot in influence and tells us histories stories that always show a happy ending when people became rich. ((1) "tells" is a third-person singular regular verb, so it has an "s" at the end of it.  (2) In English, "histories" =/= "cuentos."  "Histories" = "asuntos históricos"; "Stories = "historias" or "cuentos."  

As far I am concerned, I think the most important thing in our lives is the health because you can have money, but if you don’t have health, this money isn't too much useful. Sometimes we have our health and in fact it isn't. ((1) I'm not sure what this last sentence is trying to say.  Is it that money isn't useful even when we have our health?).

As I see it, sometimes the love of your family in these days is the perfect medicine. ((1) "Your family's love" sounds a bit more natural than "the love of your family" here.  (2) I would move "these days" to the end of the sentence).

Even though, it’s true that if you have money you can pay for example a good hospital, for example, but sometimes this is not enough. ((1) It sounds more natural to put "for example" at the end of the clause and offset it with commas.  (2) You don't need "but" here because you already have "Even though" at the beginning of the sentence.)

On other hand, if you are famous you have to be able to have the paparazzis in on your back. I mean, you have less privacy.  ((1) In English, we usually call the celebrity press and photographers "the paparazzi" without an "s."  (2) "have the paparazzi on your back" = "tener los paparazzi en su espalda."  I'm not sure if this is what you're trying to say.  Maybe you mean, "have the paparazzi in your backyard" = "tener los paparazzi en su patio trasero"?)

In conclusion, I’m not saying that we can live without money, but I mean it’s not necessary to become rich to live a good life.

Good work, and I agree: money is useful up to a point, but it can't solve all of life's problems!  I've always thought that being a celebrity would be a really hard lifestyle, because it's almost impossible to get time to yourself.

Rich and famous

Some people discuss being rich and it is also said that everybody would like to be rich and famous.

In my opinion, TV is a big influence and tells us histories that always show a happy end when people became rich.
As far I am concerned I think the most important thing in our lives is health because you can have money but if you don’t have health this money isn't too much useful. Sometimes we have our health and in fact it isn't.
As I see it, sometimes the love of your family these days is the perfect medicine.

Even though, it’s true that if you have money you can pay for example a good hospital but sometimes this is not enough.
On other hand, if you are famous you have paparazzis on your back, meaning you have less privacy.

In conclusion, I’m not saying that we can live without money but I mean that it’s not necessary to become rich to live a good life.