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Mexico flagEmmanuel Garibay
One year riding a bike This month, june, it has been a year since I learn to ride on bicycle. During twenty six years of my life I was always afraid to fall or to not be capable of control myself balance. Finally, one year ago I decided to pay the service for borrow bicycles, it is called Ecobici in Mexico City. At first, I have been afraid of some car hit me or somebody see me and laughs about me, I could pass through my insecurities and now ride on bike is one of my favorite things I can do.

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One Year Riding a Bike

 

This month, June, it has been one year since I have learned to ride a bicycle. For the past twenty six years of my life, I was always afraid of falling or considered myself incapable of maintaining my balance when bicycling. Finally, one year ago, I decided to rent a bicycle from Ecobici in Mexico City.
At first, I was afraid that I would be hit by a car or that somebody would laugh at me. Ultimately, I overcame my insecurities and have now discovered that riding a bike is one of my favorite things to do.

 

What a great story, Emmanuel. Congratulations on overcoming your fears. There is a lesson in your story for all of us.

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One year riding a bike

This month, June, it has been a year since I learned to ride on a bicycle. For ('During' no es equivocado pero creo que 'For' es mas comun) twenty six years of my life I was always afraid to fall or not be able to control myself balance. Finally, one year ago I decided to pay for the service to borrow bicycles. it is called Ecobici in Mexico City.
At first, I had been afraid of being hit by a car or somebody seeing me and laughing about me, I could pass through my insecurities and now bike riding is one of my favorite things I can do.

 

Que lindo este cuento! A mi no me gusta montar una bicicleta por que me duele las rodillas pero me parece muy divertido y libre. Tambien, tu cuaderno tuvo solo pocos problemas. Muy bien.

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