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Cut a short hair Recently, I cut my hair short. My new look was so popular that my friends and colleagues all said it's very fit for you. I'm very happy to hear it for a few days. But a few people think long hair is suit me better. I sincerely thank the Barber to design hairstyle for me. Though I have to cut a hair per three to four weeks. It‘s pleasantly cool to cut hair short in the summer seasons. I like it very much. 最近我剪了一个短发。我的朋友和同事都说新发型很适合我,很受欢迎。我听到这些高兴了好几天。但也有几个朋友觉得长头发比较适合我。我衷心地多谢发型师为我设计的造型。虽然不得不每隔3到4周剪一次头发。在夏季剪短发确实凉爽。我非常喜欢。

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Cut a short hair

Recently, I cut my hair short. My new look was so popular that my friends and colleagues all said it's very fit for you. I'm very happy to hear it for a few days. But a few people think long hair is suit me better. I sincerely thank the Barber to design hairstyle for me. Though I have to cut a hair per three to four weeks. It‘s pleasantly cool to cut hair short in the summer seasons. I like it very much.

最近我剪了一个短发。我的朋友和同事都说新发型很适合我,很受欢迎。我听到这些高兴了好几天。但也有几个朋友觉得长头发比较适合我。我衷心地多谢发型师为我设计的造型。虽然不得不每隔3到4周剪一次头发。在夏季剪短发确实凉爽。我非常喜欢。

Sorry, 2nd last sentence should read: "It's pleasantly cool to have short hair in the summer."

 

You did a great job on this paragraph - your English is really very good!!! :)

 

 

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Got a short haircut!

Recently, I cut my hair short. My new look was so popular that my friends and colleagues all said it's a very good look for me. I was very happy to hear that for a few days, but a few people think long hair suits me better. I sincerely thank the hairdresser who chose this hairstyle for me and did such a great job cutting and styling it. I will have to get my hair cut every three to four weeks to keep the style looking good.  It‘s pleasantly cool to have a short hair cut in the summer seasons. I like it very much!

最近我剪了一个短发。我的朋友和同事都说新发型很适合我,很受欢迎。我听到这些高兴了好几天。但也有几个朋友觉得长头发比较适合我。我衷心地多谢发型师为我设计的造型。虽然不得不每隔3到4周剪一次头发。在夏季剪短发确实凉爽。我非常喜欢。

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I Cut a short My Hair Short

Recently, I cut my hair short. My new look was so popular that my friends and colleagues all said it's very fit for you suits me. I'm was very happy to hear it for a few days. But a few people think long hair is suits me better. I sincerely thank the hairdresser Barber (a  Barber is a man's hairdresser)to design who styled my hair. hairstyle for me. Though I have to trim it every  cut a hair per three to four weeks. It‘s pleasantly cool to cut have hair short hair in the summer seasons. I like it very much. 


最近我剪了一个短发。我的朋友和同事都说新发型很适合我,很受欢迎。我听到这些高兴了好几天。但也有几个朋友觉得长头发比较适合我。我衷心地多谢发型师为我设计的造型。虽然不得不每隔3到4周剪一次头发。在夏季剪短发确实凉爽。我非常喜欢。

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Cut a short hair

Recently, I cut my hair short. My new look was so popular that my friends and colleagues all said it's very fit for you suits me very much. I'm very happy to hear it for a few days. But a few people think long hair is suits me better. I sincerely thank the hairdresser Barber to who designed the hairstyle for me. Though I have to cut a hair per three to four weeks. It‘s pleasantly cool to cut hair short in the summer seasons. I like it very much.

最近我剪了一个短发。我的朋友和同事都说新发型很适合我,很受欢迎。我听到这些高兴了好几天。但也有几个朋友觉得长头发比较适合我。我衷心地多谢发型师为我设计的造型。虽然不得不每隔3到4周剪一次头发。在夏季剪短发确实凉爽。我非常喜欢。

 

Very good! When talking about hair cutting: Barbers cut men's hair and Hairdresser cut women's hair. Barber: Male. Hairdresser: Female :)

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