Music fest
Every year on the 21th of june, in France we celebrate the begining of the summer with music.
In 1982, the ministre of culture decided to create this event.
The first years, it was a modest event with only non-professional groupe. But littel by littel, it grew up because pubs and restaurants wanted to earn much money and they paid professional band with loud sonor effects.
Luckily, some places are still quiet with musicians who play with accoustic instruments, or choirs. Personaly, That's what I prefer.
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Music Fest
Every year on the 21st of June, in France we celebrate the beginning of the Summer with music.
In 1982, the Minister of Culture decided to create this event.
In the first few years, it was a modest event with only non-professional groups but little by little, it grew. This was because pubs and restaurants wanted to earn more money. They paid professional bands with loud sound effects.
Luckily, some places are still quiet with musicians who play acoustic instruments, or choirs. Personally, that's what I prefer.
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Music fest
Annually, on June 21st, France celebrates the beginning of summer with music. This was an event created by the Culture of Ministry in 1982. It started as a modest event with a handful of non-professional bands. However, it's evolved as bars and restaurants wanted a piece of the proceeds. They've includes professional bands with louder systems.
Luckily, there are still some lower keyed offerings such as acoustical music and choirs. This is my personal preference.
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This sounds like a wonderful event. I've modified the text into a sentence structure that is more typical for English. Gramatiically, the original is more of a direct translation from French.
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Bonjour Dominique! Thank you for writing about the history of this annual summer music festival. I was in Paris with my two adult sons this past June 21st. They loved the loud music and crowds of rowdy young people. I agree with you, though. I enjoyed the soulful jazz, blues, and acoustic musicians. I think the beauty of the festival is that there is music for every taste!
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Bonjour, Dominique! Dans ma ville (Portland, Maine, etas-unis) nous avons un fête de la musique aussi. Je préfère la musique tranquille aussi!
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Music fest
Every year on the 21th of june, in France we celebrate the begining of the summer with music.
In 1982, the ministre of culture decided to create this event.
The first years, it was a modest event with only non-professional groupe. But bit by bit, it became bigger, because pubs and restaurants wanted to earn more money, and so they paid professional band with loud sonor effects.
Luckily, some places are still quiet, with musicians who play with accoustic instruments or choirs. Personally, that's what I prefer.
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