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self-introduction
I'm yang. (You can also say: "My name is Yang." to make it a better sentence.)
Yang is family name. (While this sentence is correct by itself, to make the above sentence and this one go along better you can say: "Yang is actually my family name." I made this correction because usually people introduce themselves using their first name. Since you used your family name, you did something different. Thus "actually" highlights that makes a better flow between the two sentences.)
I am dental hygienist. (You can say: "I am a dental hygienist.")
I work medical office in company. (You can say: "I work in the medical department of a company".)
I love everything about travel. (You can say: "I love everything that has to do with travelling.")
Sometimes I felt that i need English in life.
so I desperately need your help ( '-')/
(You can combine the above sentences like so to make them better: "I feel I really need to understand English so I desperately need your help.")
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