THE PHARMACEUTICAL INDUSTRY TO DO DRIFT: THE MEDICINES THAT DIDN'T HEALS.What do you thing about it?
A medicine that didn't heal cuold seem strange , but is the rationalest from the point of wiew the marketing instead. There is something don't right that if is possible to read a new like that to see on "Correire della Sera" at 26 May woth the title: "It was found a medicine for serious hill, but neverone to producing it.
After years to study, the searching by IFOM of Milano have identific and describe the cause to a exstramily serious genetic hill, the main cause to celebrar hemoreage in the child less ten years old .
But the medication is not produced more, and anyone farmaceutic industry want to produced it, because is they consider that few profitable.
We are alone a mercat! What do you thing about it?
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THE PHARMACEUTICAL INDUSTRY TO DO DRIFT: THE MEDICINES THAT DIDN'T HEALS.What do you thing about it?
A medicine that doesn't heal could seem strange, but is the rationalest from the point of view the of marketing instead (instead not needed here because of the "but" earlier). There is something not right that if it is possible to read a news story like that on "Correire della Sera" on the 26th of May with the title: "A medicine was found for a serious illness, but nobody will produce it."
After years of study, the researchers at IFOM of Milano have identified and described the cause of an extremely serious genetic illness, the main cause to cerebral hemorrhage in children less than ten years old .
However, the medication is not being produced, and no pharmaceutical industry company wants to produce it because they consider it unprofitable.
Very difficult words here, so not too bad. Some simple mistakes, and a lot of spelling mistakes.
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THE PHARMACEUTICAL INDUSTRY TO DO DRIFT : THE MEDICINES THAT DIDN'T HEALS.
The medicine that didn't heal (Titolo troppo lungo/Plurale non è necessario)
What do you thing about it this? (Titolo ora è parte del testo)
A medicine that didn't doesn't heal cuold (rimpiazzare "could") might seem strange, but is the rationalest most rational idea from the point of wiew the of marketing. instead (non è necessario) There is something don't right estrange with that. if is How is it possible to read a new news like that to see the one on the "Correire della Sera" at on the 26th of May? woth with the title: "It was found a A medicine was found for a serious hill illness, but neverone nobody to will producing produce it.
After years to of study, the searching search by the IFOM of Milano have identified and described the cause to a of an exstramily extremely serious genetic hill illness, the main cause to cerebral hemoreage hemorrhage in the children less than ten years old. However, But the medication is not being produced anymore, and anyone no farmaceutic pharmaceutical industry company wants to produced it, because is they consider it that few not profitable.
We are alone Are we just a mercat! meerkat! What do you thing about it this?
Nota: Bravo amico mio. Prestare molta attenzione a l'compitazione.
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