My holiday...
My holiday:
Every holiday, is different for me. I like have different activities for example: Yesterday be good weather, I stop a think, "today is very nice, is the start the summer, why don't, prepare a garden in my balcony? Yes, of course that... so, the first of all, I need buy the instruments for prepare a garden (plants, land and flower pon) So, I went to shopping, after when I arrived to my home I prepare for start... After 4 hours finally I finish my activities, my girlfriend arrived, she that surprise, who would have thought it!
This is my example... one garden beatiful love it a one women... Regards,
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My holiday...
My holiday:
Every holiday is different for me. I like to have different activities. For example, yesterday´s weather was good, and I stopped to think, "Today is very nice. It´s the start of the summer, why don't I prepare a garden in my balcony? Yes, of course... so, first of all, I need to buy the materials to prepare a garden (plants, dirt and flower pots). So I went shopping after arriving home(could reword for clarity)... After 4 hours finally I finish my activities. My girlfriend arrived and was surprised by my garden. Who would have thought!
This is my example... one beautiful garden loved by a beautiful women(I was not sure what you meant here so I made a guess;) )... Regards,
Overall, Good Job! I generally knew what you were saying. Just watch for those hard-to-spell words like "beautiful", and some other grammar issues.
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