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A romantic love story but sad outcome It’s AM 12 o’clock,it’s time to get off duty, I follow the people stream to went out of office, and went down stairs to have my lunch,when I went to the gate,I saw a man take a bunch of flower standing there…the flower is fresh and beautiful,I thought the man is about 23 years old.and 165 centimetres tall,he was wear a green T-shirt,and black trousers. It’s very hot today,there is some sweat steamed out of his forehead.scince I was hurry to have my lunch,so I didn’t stay there to view the whole process.namely,I didn’t see the heroine. In lunch,all of my colleagues were imagine and discusse with this romantic love story.we thought the girl will be received the flower shyly,and give a hug to the man,then leave together to have lunch. We are regreting of that we did not know about the outcome,fortunately,I have detected some news.,can you guess what happened? Unexpected,in afternoon,when I finished my daily work,and walked on my way home,I found the flower threw in the rubbish bin messily.it was amazing me.i didn’t know that what unfortunate encounter of the man was suffered..maybe very awkward and embarrassed…

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A Romantic Love Story but sad outcome With a Sad Outcome.

It’s AM 12 o’clock 12 AM,it’s time to get off duty, I follow the people stream to went out of the office, and went go down stairs to have my lunch,when I go to the gate,I saw see a man standing there take a bunch of flowers standing there. The flowers is are fresh and beautiful,I think the man is about 23 years old and 165 centimetres tall,he was wear a green T-shirt,and black trousers.

It’s very hot today,there is some sweat steamed out of his forehead running down his forehead. Since I was in a hurry to have my lunch,so I didn’t stay there to view the whole process.namely,I didn’t see the heroine.

After lunch,all of my colleagues were imagined and discussed with this the romantic love story.We thought the girl willwould  be receive the flowers shyly,and give a hug to the man the man a hug,then they would leave together to have lunch.

We are regreting of that we did not know about the outcome regret that we did not know the outcome,fortunately,I have detected some news.,can you guess what happened?

Unexpected,in afternoon When I finished my daily work,and walked was on my way home,I found the flowers threw thrown in the rubbish bin messily.it was amazing me.i didn’t know that what unfortunate encounter of the man was suffered..maybe very awkward and embarrassed… I was amazed I couldn't imagine what the man must have felt probably awkward and embarrassed. 

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yes,it sounds better then me.... thank you,girl.
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I saw a man standing there with a bunch of flowers, fresh and beautiful flowers. 如果是我. 會這樣寫. 不知是否正確

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