Raining

Yesterday, when I went home while it was raining very hard. The wind is was also very hard, it blew every soft thing it met on street. I drove my motorbike under rain and wind. My face was hurt when raindrops blew hit me. I tried to drive, under strong wind, I felt it can could blow me over any time and my eyes can't couldn't open because raindrops made them hurt make it very hurt. I didnt want to find some place where I can shelter because I really wanted to go home as soon as possible. Only about 7 km but I lost took a long time to drive, I was careful because with that weather, it's easy to hit another motorbike or any person waiking on the street...
Now I have am a little busy so I will finish at here. I felt It was difficult to wrrite this notebook because it had to use past tense sentence. :)

Good job! Yes, the main errors were not using past tense. I think you have a poetic way of writing, very descriptive. :)

Also, be careful using the phrase "blow me" - it's slang for oral sex, and in certain contexts the phrase might really confuse people!