Your Masterpiece.

We cannot have all the circunstance circumstances of our life lives under control. No matter how hard we you try, there will be days when you would will get late to your job or to an interview late because of the traffic. Other Another day it will rain and you would will have to change your plans or even cancelled it cancel them. That is life. It is full of surprises.

The life is not predictible. It does not always give you always what you are looking for, nor or what you want, nor or what you deserve. That is the reallityreality. ('Nor' is almost always paired with 'neither.')

Every day is a masterpiece that we create with the way we think, the way we act and with our choices. Remenber Remembering that we you will die is the best way to avoid the trap of thinking that we you actually have somthing to lose.

Take Make the desition decision to live your life in a fullness the fullest way. Give the 100% in everything that you do. Do not skimp in all the effort, passion, energy, love, forgiveness and gratitude that you can give today. Do not think that you can keep a little piece of all this for tomorrow.

See you later.

This is a beautiful lesson and sentiment!

In regard to the corrections, I like how you switch between the plural (we) and the personal (you) but I thought it made more sense to limit the 'we' to the first sentence of the paragraph.

Your Masterpiece.

We cannot have all the circunstance of our life under control. No matter how hard we try, there will be days when you would get late to your job or to an interview because of the traffic. Other day It will rain and you would have to change your plans or even cancelled it. That is life. It is full of surprices.

The life is not predictible. It does not give you always what you looking for, nor what you want, nor what you deserve. That is the reallity.

Every day is a masterpiece that we create with the way we think, the way we act and with our choices. Remenber that we will die is the best way to avoid the trap of thinking that we actually have somthing to lose.

Take the desition to live your life in a fullness way. Give the 100% in everything that you do. Do not skimp in all the effort, passion, energy, love, forgiveness and gratitude that you can give today. Do not think that you can keep a little piece of all this for tomorrow.

See you later.

Your Masterpiece.

We cannot have all the circumstances of our lives under control. No matter how hard you try, there will be days when you will get to your job or to an interview late because of the traffic. Another day it It will rain and you will have to change your plans or even cancel them. That is life. It is full of surprises.

The life is not predictible. It does not always give you what you are looking for, or what you want, or what you deserve. That is the reality.

Every day is a masterpiece that we create with the way we think, the way we act and with our choices. Remembering that you will die is the best way to avoid the trap of thinking that you actually have somthing to lose.

Make the decision to live your life in the fullest way. Give 100% in everything that you do. Do not skimp in all the effort, passion, energy, love, forgiveness and gratitude that you can give today. Do not think that you can keep a little piece of all this for tomorrow.

See you later.