my rutine life and work...(please help me to correct the mistakes)
Ringing……
it is 7:30 o’clock, My alarm is ringing and waked me up,but,I did not open my eyes.I stretched my arm and try to close the alarm,yeah!the ringing is stopped,I turned over and continue to sleep for one more minute.and then,I am absolutely cleared.
I uncovered my quilt,and opened my eyes,I am sat on the bed for a while,then wearing my slipper,and squeeze some toothpaste on the toothbrush,then go to the washroom brush my teeth and wash my face.
If I am a girl,maybe I will put on a bit of makeup,unfortunately,I am a man,of course,I will ignore this stage.i am wearing my uniform shirt,dress my private pants and shoes,according to my habit,I am drinking a cup of water in every morning.then,take my work card and meal card go down stairs to have my breakfast.
In generally,I will have 2 bread and a cup of milk in every morning,if there is enough time,I will stay at the canteen to finish my breakfast,if no,I will wrap then and take them to my office.today,the time is hurry,i have to take the breakfast to my office.
Holy shit,what a hot weather!I have heard the weather forecast,the temperature will reach to 38 degree centigrade today,it is very terrible.when I though this,I can not help but speed my walk to my office to enjoy the air condition.my office room is 405 on the fourth floor,I am go up stairs and reached on the fourth floor,then,turn right and go straight ahead about 100 metres,turn right,it’s my office.
There are 2 colleagues there,I think they were earlier than me for a few minutes,the air condition was opened,it is cool and comfortable.I am sat on my seat of compartment,subsequent opened my computer and prepare to start my day work.
There are some remain technic forms need me to fill out sent by customer yesterday…
It is not the end,I will continue tomorrow….
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thanks for you comment,girl...
hm...my english is not very good,and i am try to practice in writing...
this is my first composition...
i think it is too long,and no body willing whole and serious to reading it..
so i do not know the mistakes that may had.named,i can not correct them...
whereas,i will write short composition,then,some body can correct them.
eventually,hope we can make progress together...
i believe that we can speaking naturally in english with anyone in the near future...
jiayou(加油,i do not know how to express it)...girl!
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I am sat on my seat of compartment,
i think it should be"I was sit on my seat of compartment"~
um…i am also Chinese~but i believe your English is quite good!!:))
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