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How to balance the time between being an internship and a student
about to leave school, I decided recently to apply to be an intern for a foreign company. However, a month has passed by since then, and thinking about it, I feel it is going to be hard for me to balance my time between work and study. My two main reasons for saying this are; firstly, the distance from my colledge to my company is too great. It will take me at least an hour to go to work every morning. Secondly, the subway that I have to take to work is very crowded. I am going to feel tired every day, and if i have to spend so much time getting to work, I'm going to have very little time to study. However, if i don't take the internship, I will be at a disadvantage when I am looking for a job. What a difficult problem!
Hope you don't mind but I have corrected it to make it sound more like an English person would say it rather than simply correct the grammar.
I would advise you to look again at your use of tenses as sometimes I had difficulty deciding whether what you were talking about had already happened, was happening now, or was going to happen.
I changed "far away" to "great" because whilst the college would be too far away but a distance can't be.
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