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Do chores together. I made up a way of memorizing new words. I have some of them and I have to use all of them in my short essay. There are: Walking in the park, see a new movie, listen to music, watch television, clean the house, buy something, send an e-mail, do a lot of work, try on something clothes, look around, wake up, eat in, take offense at. Do chores together I like walking in the park, looking at couples. They are so different but so beautiful. They sit on the benches, talking, smiling, laughing, and kissing. Then they look around, and feel embarrassed when passersby glance at them. Some couple come back at home and do the same chores day after day. They see a new movie together, listen to music, watch television until late night and wake up to gentle kiss or annoying ringing of alarm clock. Usually she cleans the house by herself, listening to music or trying on some clothes that actually are old but still remind her of the nice times when they were dating. In this time, he always begins to send an important email or pretends that he has to do a lot of work. She knows this but never takes offense at him. In the evenings, they take their dog out for a walk, buy some food at the supermarket, cook and eat in together. Maybe they are tired during the day but for them is the happiness to be side by side and do the same things every day.

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Действительно, отлично. Я имею бы лишь очень мало исправленией, и просто в большой части, по отношению к раздражающим артиклям.

 

try on something clothes. Not really worth correcting, because you used it correctly in your text ))
 
...and feel embarrassed when a passersby glances /  when passers-by (особенно необычное множественное число!) glance at them. Some couples come back at home and do the same chores day after day. They see a new movie together, listen to music, watch television until late at night and wake up to a gentle kiss or the annoying ringing of the (/an) alarm clock. 

Maybe they are tired during the day but for them it isthehappiness to be side by side and do the same things every day.

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