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Beautiful place in indonesia Hi guys i think all of you know about indonesia. Indonesia have a many beautiful place, maybe you know this place. Bali, is beautiful place in indonesia, i have many friend not come from indonesia. when i say "you know indonesia" there are always say "i don't know" but if i say " you know bali or you know jakarta?" there are say "yes i know that's place" Indonesia have a many beautiful place not just in bali. If you come in indonesia you must goes to bromo mountain, penanjakan mountain, etc. In bromo mountain you can feel comfort, because many beautiful view from there, you can feel fresh oxygen in there. if you want to come in bromo don't forget to take a your picture and tell your friends if indonesia not just in Bali :)

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Beautiful place in indonesia

Hi guys, I think all of you know about(or- have heard about) Indonesia. Indonesia has a many beautiful places. Maybe you know this place... 
Bali, is a beautiful place in Indonesia. I have many friends who do not come from Indonesia. When I say, "Do you know about Indonesia?" there ,they are always say "I don't know". But if I say "Do you know Bali or you know Jakarta?" there are They usually say "Yes, I know that's that place." Indonesia have has a many beautiful places, not just in Bali. If you come in to Indonesia, you must goes go to Bromo mountain, Penanjakan mountain, etc.
In At Bromo mountain you can feel comfort, because many of the beautiful view and the fresh air. from there, you can feel fresh oxygen in there.
If you want to come in to Bromo, don't forget to take a your picture (or- don't forget to bring your camera) and tell your friends if that Indonesia is not just in Bali :) (or- that Indonesia has more that just Bali.)


Good job! Your notebook entry makes me want to visit Indonesia :D

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there is no doubt abt that indonesia is one of the most stunning destination in the world, what makes indonesia unique from others countries are his people,it wont be wrong if u call indonesia the land of smiles .....one thing i wanna add u forgot to mention places like mount batur,lombok,gilis and raja ampat.........

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