My summer break plan
This summer break is very important for me, because it maybe my last summer break in china. So I must do some thing significant, which I can't do in american, such as get my driver's lincese and share time with my family. A big mount of my classmate have their driver's lincese already, that's make me feel no good, I must get mine ASAP. Besides,my cousin have just do through his hardest time-GAO KAO, we both want have some time play together since we are child, and I know this summer is our last chance and only one. Get lincese and play with my cousin, that is my summer break plan.
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My plans for summer break:
This summer break is very important to me, because it may be my last summer break in China. So, I must do something significant that I can't do in America, like getting my driver's lincense and spending time with my family. Quite a few of my classmates have their driver's linceses already. That makes me feel bad. I must (or, have to) get mine ASAP. Besides, my cousin has just gone through a really difficult time in GAO KAO. We both want to spend some time together while we are still young, and I know this summer may be the last chance we get . Getting my lincense and playing with my cousin- that is my summer break plan.
(I had to guess what you meant in a few of these sentences. I hope I guessed correctly!)
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I misspelled "license" wrong twice in my correction, and I don't know how to correct it. :(
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By the way, how old is your cousin? If he's a little kid, you would "play" with him, but if you are both teenagers or older, you would "spend time with" your friend, or maybe "hang out with" your friend.
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