My favorite country

My favorite country is Japan. But I have never been there before. I  like Japan because I want to see snow. If I can go to Japan, I can play snow ball fights with my parents. If I go to Japan, I will go to Hokkaido because their ice cream is very famous. On Summer is the best time to eat an ice cream time of all. I will go to Disneyland in Japan because they have many interesting things like the roller coaster and the ferris wheel. How wheel is a is have a rollar coster and his track is circle. I don’t think I need to talk to you about roller coasters because you already know what it is. I think you might like to go to Japan!

- Stanley

*I don't know what How wheel is but I assume it's a ferriswheel?

My favorite country

My favorite country is Japan. But have I never being been there before. I like Japan because I want to see snow. If I can go to Japan, I can play have a snowball fight with mine my parents. If I go to Japan, I will go to Hokkaido because there their ice-cream is very famous. On summer eat an ice-cream is the best time of all Summer is the best time of all to eat ice cream. I will go to Disneyland on in Japan, because there they have many interesting things like a roller coaster and howeeel. How wheel is a is have a rollar coster and his track is circle. And roller coster I think I don’t need to talk about that. Because I think one know that. I don't think I need to talk about roller coasters; you know about that.  I think you might go to Japan!

- stanley

I am not certain about the 'how wheel'.  Disneyland Japan may have a 'ferris wheel' (like this: http://goo.gl/ikHwxF).  Is that what you were referring to?