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Dragon Boat Festival We will have a three days' vocation because the Dragon Boat Festival. It's a festival to memory a great poet named Quyuan. Chinese people will hold many dragon boat competitions, and eat Zongzi, a traditional Chinese rice-pudding. I miss the Zongzi made by my mom. It's really delicious and unforgettable. I want to have a trip during this vocation. I'm really busy and tired and agonizing this month. I do need a big rest, and a good happy holiday. But all my friends are so busy that no one can go with me to travel. That's so bad and so sad. I always think that whether your landscape is fascinating depends on the one who enjoys it with you. Even if it's a wonderland, so what ? He doesn't enjoy it with you. But in fact, we always are alone, and no one companies in our journey. Maybe life just is lonely. Well, I should plan to have a good holiday after all. Maybe I have to go with myself, but so what ? Everyone is alone, and I'm not lonely. May I have a good holiday. Come on.

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Dragon Boat Festival

We will have a three-days' vacation because for the Dragon Boat Festival. It's a festival to memory commemorate a great poet named Quyuan. Chinese people will hold many dragon boat competitions, and eat Zongzi, a traditional Chinese rice-pudding. I miss the Zongzi made by my mom. It's really delicious and unforgettable. (It's unforgettable because it is so delicious) 
I want to have take a trip during this vacation. However, I'm really agonizingly busy and tired and agonizing this month. I do need a big lot of rest, and a good, happy holiday. But Unfortunately, all my friends are so busy that no one can go travel with me to travel. That's so bad and so sad. (That is so dissapointing.) 
I always think that whether or not your landscape is fascinating depends on the one who enjoys it with you. Even if it's a wonderland, so what ?..... He doesn't unless someone enjoys it with you. In fact, we always are alone; no one accompanies us in our journies. Maybe life just is lonely.
Well, I should plan to have a good holiday after all. Maybe I have to go with by myself, but so what ? Everyone is alone, and I'm not lonely. May I have a good holiday. Come on.

 

Thanks for sharing! For the most part, I agree with your ideas about life and loneliness... it is a very interesting topic. I hope you have a delightful journey :-)


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