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I went Zaragoza five years ago, my family have bought a small house in the city. I traveled to Zaragoza with my small brother for go to parties. The climatology are very hot, we don´t like this, one night we have gone to a party near of Ebro river, when a flash flood flooded the party house, all people that assited to these party have had clean the roof and the party stopped.
I´ll never forget these night, all the beer taked away for the river, it was horrible.
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I went to Zaragoza five years ago. my family have bought a small house in the city. I traveled to Zaragoza with my small little brother for to go to parties. The climatology are climate is very hot. We don´t didn't like this that. One night we have gone were at a party near of the Ebro river, when a flash flood flooded the party house. All people Everyone that assited attended to these the party have had to clear the roof and the party stopped.
I´ll never forget these that night. All the beer taked away for fell in the river. It was horrible.
I didn't understand the part about the roof. Was the party ON the roof?
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